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  1. daciasdesire

    Asian Persuasion

    This chapter is now up if anyone is interested. https://chyoa.com/chapter/No.432059
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    Asian Persuasion

    I’ll go with “The End” at the end of the chapter when I get around to writting it. If someone wants to ignore that I can always reject the thread.
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    Asian Persuasion

    Does anyone know how to have a thread be an end of a branch with no threads able to come after it? I want to finish an off branch with a dead end
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    Nearly there: 10.000 Stories

    Sorry to revive this dead thread but what was this magical 10,000th story? And did we come up with a way to celebrate it?
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    Asian Persuasion

    Thanks for the feedback Zeebop. I've taken what you said on board and edited it out so that the texts are separate from the paragraphs. Hopefully easier to read. I've hopefully made the dialogue a bit better in my latest thread, rather than just perfunctionary. I've also started to introduce to...
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    Asian Persuasion

    So glad you like it madmaniac. I’ll definitely keep it up. Got more coming very soon.
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    Asian Persuasion

    Introducing my new story: Asian Persuasion Back when I used to write a lot, I had two titles for stories that I always wanted to do. This is the first one them. Thankfully no one had used it or my other secret one too. The basic premise of the story is a bouncer working in a nightclub with a...
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    How did this get approved?

    First chapter should be min 250 words. Nope. This is 12 The chapter should establish the plot, setting, and main characters, and should end with a compelling 'hook'. Ahh no, nope, nope and nope. While this is the minimum... It doesn't establish the minimum and should therefore be rejected...
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    How did this get approved?

    It says right in the Chyoa guide: For public and moderated stories, the first chapter should be minimum 250 words. The chapter should establish the plot, setting, and main characters, and should end with a compelling 'hook' to encourage other writers to continue the story. While this is the...
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    How did this get approved?

    https://chyoa.com/story/I-have-sex.15778 New story approved about half an hour ago. Adds absolutely nothing to the site. How did it make it past approvals?
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    Feeling ownership over my story

    I actually prefer for people to take more control over my story. I find I have so much more inspiration for what comes next after someone posts in mine. I love playing off my ideas. I dont feel a whole lot of ownership of my stories. Two of mine are in other peoples hand and I wouldnt have it...
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    A relapsed writer makes her return...

    A relapsed writer makes her return...
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    Its only been 14 years...

    Lol Ive got to be more thorough with my editing rather than being so keen to hit publish right away
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    Its only been 14 years...

    Im trying to get back into the swing of it and bring my writing skill back up to scratch as fast as possible
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    Its only been 14 years...

    Its great seeing all the old names come out of the woodwork. Old friends :-) I've certainly earnt my wine. 20 chapters in 3 days I think
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    Its only been 14 years...

    Thank you Nemo. I hope you like it and its not too much of a pain to edit. I also know how to quite now! lol
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    Its only been 14 years...

    Jake! Wonderful to see you here also. I remember your writing fondly from the old site
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    Its only been 14 years...

    Nemo I wrote you something! xx
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    Its only been 14 years...

    Welcome back as well grimbous! Im looking forward to seeing who I know is still here
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    Its only been 14 years...

    Thanks. Wow its exceedingly well written!
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