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I'll look into it.Probably take me a few days as it has over 30 chapters of written material.

Which is fine. It's just not my cup of tea.

Sorry 2nd person just pulls me out of a story. I read it and think "I would never do say any of that." Also the repetitive you pronoun makes me want to scream.

I actually had a person contact me via pm to critique their story today. If people want to do that I will give my honest opinion to them. Please know it might take me some time depending on my schedule the length of your thread you want me to do. *My only limitation would be stories in 2nd...

Does the 25 chapter minimum pertain to depth or total?

The vetting of critics would be the most difficult. As for how it would be done since we are all hobbyist I was thinking something like r/eroticauthors where there would be one day people could submit a work for review and someone would critique it. Might be could you read this one chapter or...

I disagree. I have found that game chapters are often much shorter. Partially because you have to break them up for more choices and partially because you end up writing "the nothing happens" chapters that you would probably not write in a traditional story. Game stories get the double shaft in...

I guess this more for the game mode people as it's a necessity for that type of story. Would there be anyway to remove linked chapters from the total chapter count. For example True Fan currently sits at 102 chapters. However, a whopping 25 of those are linked chapters. So in reality the...

Supposedly. Though it seems to be more a place where authors go to yell in the woods about their story. I thought maybe if we renamed it. Maybe got volunteer critics who would do an in depth criticism of works. Set some ground rules like your story must be so many chapters words long. Other...

Maybe we should start a critique thread or sub. A thread or sub where people could post their stories specifically to be critiqued.

I would think a private message to the author would work better. Now if the story is garbage I say let it go. It's highly doubtful any criticism you can give a "garbage" story will save it. If you see an author that is generally a good author but making a bad decision (i.e. flaw in logic, plot...

I think Normally Patreon charges everyone at a certain time each month with no prorating.

We have a second $24 dollar pledge*. Guess us writers need to be ready :D. *It's not me just in case someone was thinking that.

I think six months may be a bit too long. If they've been inactive for quite a while a month should suffice.