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Thanks for this, a lot of good points for me to work on.

I’ve just published my first story on this site and I am in desperate need of feedback. https://chyoa.com/story/An-Innocent-Wife%E2%80%99s-Urges.54069 If anyone could read it and tell me if what I’m doing is coherent and interesting or should I keep the stories in my head where they can’t bore...