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  1. MidbossMan

    Recommendation / Recommendation Requests

    Here are a couple more stories I've enjoyed recently which... in hindsight... don't really have anything to do with the cute relationships I was talking about earlier! But they're still nice. The Erotic Combat League- it's a game style story about working your way up as an erotic wrestler. Not...
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    Help with line breaks

    I'm still toggled on to use rich text editor. I'll try turning that off and working with it. Thanks
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    Help with line breaks

    Hey guys- I'm having a little trouble getting line breaks to work a certain way. When you hit enter normally, you start a new paragraph and thus get a blank space between your new and previous. When I instead hit either SHIFT + Enter, I seemingly get what I want: a paragraph that starts with no...
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    How important are likes to you

    On one hand, yeah, it can be a useful guideline and who doesn't like to get likes, after all? Seeing the branch become popular makes you want to strike while the iron is hot. On another hand, I have a strong suspicion that there are going to be a lot of factors that skew how many likes a...
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    Do scattered story maps turn you away?

    I kind of know what you mean... it's a little paradoxical. In my case, specifically, it's sort of like... if the story is small, I feel like "I'll get in on the ground floor, that way it's easy to read and I can support the author!" If it's huge, I'm like "well, the ship's sailed on this one and...
  6. MidbossMan

    Cringiest Lines in Porn/Erotica?

    I can't really harsh on people about the step-sister thing since that's just the specific fetish. The same way I sometimes prefer a character half-stripped instead of full nude or giving a butt job but not anal, sometimes the "safe option" is just the person's preference. :p Of course, wanting...
  7. MidbossMan

    Becoming a Warrior!

    Seems to me Fantasy would be a good fit for it; it isn't quite fantasy, but there's still things like hunting parties of warriors and things, combat classes at school, and such. I'd say it has enough of the fantasy stuff to go there. In the end, it's up to you and I don't think you're likely...
  8. MidbossMan

    The Goodbye Girls: A Story of Subterfuge

    Weakness and strength at the beginning reveals some hidden text throughout various chapters (besides giving a few beginning points of one affinity). I don't intend it to affect which chapters you can choose, though, just scattered hidden text. For instance, if you chose Weakness for Video Games...
  9. MidbossMan

    1001 Quick Story Ideas

    ((I'm going to jump to 62, following BrainDamage 58 and the additional 3, not sure what's going on with the numbers here. :p )) 62. Love Like it's the Lost Time: A detective with amnesia blotting out parts of their memory investigates the last case before their memory loss. As they dig deeper...
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    The Goodbye Girls: A Story of Subterfuge

    Hey, I think you'll like the next free time update coming. It may take just bit longer than usual since there is a lot to add this time, but I thank you for continuing to read. :)
  11. MidbossMan

    Paladin Simulator

    Heya! As I alluded to in my comments, I love this game! The structure is surprisingly fun to play, but more than that, it's just got a great sense of humor. Literally had me laughing out loud. :D If I had one criticism, it would be that the part right after you get your holy shield and go out...
  12. MidbossMan

    Game Mode story advice

    Dang, I just learned a lot of stuff I need to try out to make my dossiers and things read better. :p This was a worthwhile conversation.
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    Game Mode story advice

    Yeah, my point being that your testing mode can also function as a skip that people will want to use.
  14. MidbossMan

    Game Mode story advice

    I love game mode stories! And I love your story, the Captive Prince! So I can't wait to see what you come up with. :D As for advice, after working on my three games, I'd echo some advice Insertnamehere gave me earlier and just try to keep the variables as simple as you can without losing the...
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    The currently available categories don't make much sense

    Mostly I like this; I do anticipate there could be some difficulties getting authors to specify where their newly moved stories end up. Not sure if the easiest way would be to move them to somewhere like miscellaneous and let authors resort at their leisure or perhaps have a grace period before...
  16. MidbossMan

    The Goodbye Girls: A Story of Subterfuge

    You and me both, friend. I definitely had that theme of strong women in vulnerable positions in mind when I thought this story up... Hopefully the new stuff to come will satisfy. ;)
  17. MidbossMan

    The Goodbye Girls: A Story of Subterfuge

    Thank you for reading and your kind comments. I hope that the next after mission stuff will provide a chance for your character to kind of change their relationship with each member and you'll get to finally use some of the info you've been gathering. :)
  18. MidbossMan

    The Goodbye Girls: A Story of Subterfuge

    That seems like good advice... I do think it may be something I can just accomplish with the affinity I already had started. I will just keep it simple after all and maybe tie it back to the opinion on the dossier that changes when you reach different thresholds. Thanks! I had sort of been...
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    The Goodbye Girls: A Story of Subterfuge

    Hey folks! I'm always kind of scared to ask for critique but in this case, I'm wondering if I should implement something new that I'm not certain about. I needed to reach out before I get too far. :confused: https://chyoa.com/story/The-Goodbye-Girls%3A-A-Story-of-Subterfuge.28019 With the...
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    Emma Watson

    Plus, let us not forget, she was Hermione Granger. Harry Potter is like its own genre in terms of internet fiction. :eek:
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