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  1. Zeebop

    My Roommate Is Possessed By A Brain Slug

    https://chyoa.com/story/My-Roommate-Is-Possessed-By-A-Brain-Slug.72401 I couldn't get this idea out of my head, so...expect a very slow burn, slice-of-life, extremely fucked up kind of story. Story-in-progress note dump, spoilers ahead. ___________________________ Cast: Mel Arkwright: 18...
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    2025 Year in Review

    How did your writing go? I didn't keep track of how many individual chapters I wrote, but I worked on four stories this year - Doomed (ongoing), Pipe-weed Dreams (complete), the first Tolkienpunk Tale (complete), and 100 Candles for Halloween (complete). I didn't get to quite everything I...
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    One Hundred Candles

    https://chyoa.com/story/One-Hundred-Candles.70357 This is the discussion thread for my Halloween story this year. So don't expect any movement on this one until October 1st. The plan is basic: - Each chapter is a very short erotic horror story - There will be 100 such stories That means I'm...
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    Erotic Horror category

    I can't remember if we had one of these before the site reorg a while back or if we've always gone without it, but looking forward to Halloween I've noticed the lack of an actual Erotic Horror category. As it was noted, most of the horror-themed stories seem crammed into Fantasy or whatever, and...
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    Kink Smorgasbord vs. Narrow Focus

    I enjoy writing about lots of kinks and I cannot lie, but there is truth to the idea that you cannot please everyone, or squeeze every kink into a story. What do you writers think - is it better to incorporate a lot of kinks in a story, or focus more narrowly on one or a few kinks tightly tied...
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    Pipe-weed Dreams

    The story starts here! Okay, so unlike the other stories, this is aiming to be a longer, linear story with little to no branching, the new chapters will happen about when I feel like it, and the aim is...cozy erotic fantasy in a world that's basically the cyberpunk future of The Lord of the Rings.
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    Happy New Year. Looking Back, Looking Ahead...

    How was your 2024? Did you get all the writing done you hoped you would? Have you made any resolutions about writing in 2025? I have to say, it was a mixed bag of a year for me; in part because I've been depressed for several months, and I feel it's affected the quality and speed of my...
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    DOOMED

    https://chyoa.com/story/DOOMED.63445 So, yeah. New fanfic story. This one is going to be slower-paced and probably less branching than Lois Lane's Night Out, but I'm hoping that by not jumping straight into sex and focusing more on corruption than transformation it'll end up being better...
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    X-Rated Spellcheck Funnies

    So in my latest chapter, spellcheck decided what I actually wanted to say was "gaping duckholes." The mind boggles. Anyone else find spellcheck gives them some real bloopers?
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    Zeebop's 2023 Game Mode Story Development Thread

    A place to collect my thoughts, ask questions, solicit feedback, etc. Hopefully without too many spoilers. The gist of it is I've got the outline of it planned out - all 334 chapters. This is going to be very much in the mode of the Lone Wolf gamebooks: - Fantasy world. Magic exists, but is...
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    Bad Xmas Story Ideas

    This is mostly to draw Xmas story ideas away from the Bad Halloween Story Ideas thread, by giving them somewhere to belong. Even so, I think we're pushing the season a little. Wham, Bam, Thank You Ma'am! Joan has not been feeling the Xmas spirit. Her therapist suggested an experimental...
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    Bad Sex Development Thread

    Following the outline laid out in @Zekar's Story Challenge: Rule of 3 thread, I've decided to do a short story in this mold - one that I have long threatened to do but have never got to since I've been inundated with real life and trying to finish Lois Lane's Night Out and non-CHYOA writing. But...
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    Quantity Doesn't Equal Quality, But Is Bigger Better?

    CHYOA tends to depth versus breadth - you can search and sort by how deep a story gets but not how many chapters it has - and of course, neither depth nor total number of chapters determines whether a story is good or not. But in general, do you prefer chapters that have a lot of branches and...
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    How Much Input Do You As A Reader Like To Have On A Story?

    I know that in Lois Lane's Night Out I base which chapters get sequels (and how soon) based on number of likes and bookmarks. I know that I also try to take comments into consideration when writing sequels, and other authors run polls on the forums or off-site, or ask for voting in the comments...
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    XXX-Mas Stories

    Been thinking of binging archives of erotic stories in my misspent youth, and reminiscing on the good - and terrible! - erotic Christmas-themed stories, from Krampus delivering some BDSM-themed punishment to some absolutely-of-age-bad-little-boys-and-girls to Father Christmas keeping warm with a...
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    Poll: Do You Like Bad Ends?

    Plenty of stories have branches that just...stop. But what do you think of branches that lead to not just an end, but a bad end? One wrong move, and the story is over, click back and try another path. What do you think about that?
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    Poll: Storylines With Endings

    Many storylines in CHYOA don't "end" so much as peter out as you reach a final chapter and the author or authors haven't bothered to continue them. Do you prefer to read storylines that have defined endings...or do you not particularly care?
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    When Is A Story TOO Big?

    Throwing this out there...folks often say "bigger is better," and that's part of the reason why on the front page each story's chapter depth is shown. But what about...total chapters? What about when you click on that first chapter and there's dozens of options? Is it a turn-off when you click...
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    What Aspect Of Your Writing Would You Most Like To Improve?

    Speaking just for myself...I struggle with dirty talk. Dialogue itself flows fine, I think, but trying to do dirty talk always seems to come across as unnatural, or falls into the same patterns, and eventually devolves into chains of expletives. It's one aspect of my writing I'd really like to...
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    What Do You Look For In A Fanfic Story?

    Not everybody likes fanfic stories, and not everyone has a specific fandom they're interested in - but is there any particular aspect of fandom that you like? Are you a fan of smutty-but-realistic-to-the-original characters, or over-the-top-sex-scenes, or degradation and embarrassment or...what...
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