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  1. Deadedge

    I looked, I glanced at, then I turned my attention to...

    Thank you. These are great tips.
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    I looked, I glanced at, then I turned my attention to...

    So I'm acutely aware of the fact then when I'm writing a story with characters getting aroused and about to bang, I tend write a lot of descriptions that involve them looking at things. He looked at her X... She glanced up from his Y... Bob stared at those Z's... Jane shifted her gaze to that...
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    Confessions

    *And I should be judged! But my confession is I tend to get really into certain stories... then my interest wanes, and another idea will take its place and I'll have to start writing that instead. I'll eventually get back into an old story though and write some more of it. And I'll alternate in...
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    Confessions

    Well now I want to try and write a smutty story about characters doing those things.
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    Let's have a hangout :^)

    Haha! There was certainly an element of that, but I wouldn't disparage anybody trying to write a piece and posting it online, and I'm very aware of how amateur my own writing is. And that is the general vibe I get around here anyway: Very encouraging overall. Constructive criticism almost by...
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    SJW parody

    Those are great ideas! I could imagine her using those 3 wishes (in reverse order) as she tries to figure out how to 'solve' each new issue her last wish caused until she 'wastes' her final wish on creating a free-use world.
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    Let's have a hangout :^)

    While I haven't posted much in the forums I've lurked occasionally and I have to say this is one of the most supportive and wholesome communities I've ever come across. I'm guessing that because putting your own writing out there leaves you so vulnerable, everybody shares that same sense, and is...
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    Up Your Game: Advice From Your Peers.

    @Zeebop Amazing! Continually impressed by the community's friendliness and helpfulness. Guilty. Very valid. Almost everything I've posted so far is linear mainly because I find keeping up with multiple threads difficult to sustain. I have thought about trying the different perspective...
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    Tips on writing female masturbation scenes?

    Watch some female masturbation videos and write down what you see. Not just he physical movements or mechanics, but what the performer's expressions are, sounds they make maybe. I don't know if this will help, but may be worth a try. We can call it research.
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    Up Your Game: Advice From Your Peers.

    Oo! Oo! Do me! Do me!
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    Filter search results by Story Mode?

    Is it possible to do this currently? If not, is it possible to add this functionality? I like to search for stories to contribute to some times but when I do find one I want to add to it's usually a "moderated" story, which is fine, but I'd prefer to more easily find "Public" stories to...
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    Freeuse in an established universe

    Yeah I explained a common set of 'mechanics' I've read used other stories, but the general idea is just people fulfilling their sexual desires whenever and whereever with whoever they want openly. The rules on acceptance/refusal aren't rigid. The specific mechanics would probably stem from why...
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    Freeuse in an established universe

    My bad for not explaining what the concept is. I saw a couple free use themed stories and somehow assumed everyone would be familiar with the term. In a free use story, women and/or men are available to be freely used sexually . Though the context can vary wildly from story to story, in most...
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    Freeuse in an established universe

    In what established fictional universe from a book, movie or tv show would you want to see melded with a freeuse setting?
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    Cumquest of the West

    Hello This story https://chyoa.com/story/Cumquest-of-the-West.12049 is the first one I've done where I think there's any substantial amount of actual plot, and I'm not sure if it working or worth getting through for a reader. So to anyone who might have actually read some chapters in their...
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    Diesel City

    This is probably not all that useful as feedback... but I'm really enjoying the story, as in the bigger plot of the world at war and how say Bridget is gradually getting sucked into it. It's so fun and intriguing and filled with real peril. It's all so obviously well planned. I hope things work...
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