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    Chapter Length - How long is to long?

    It depends on the chapter. I trust my muse to tell me when to wrap things up. Usually between 1500-3000 words.
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    On The Mechanics of Slave Magic.

    Yeerks would be less of a forceful control and more of a full personality rewrite. The host might be aware, but they are not the one that people are interacting with. When I think of force manipulation, I am thinking of Kilgrave from Jessica Jones or How not to Summon a Demon Lord where the...
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    On The Mechanics of Slave Magic.

    I don't entirely disagree with you, but I can see the utility of both methods of control for non-sexual purposes. When I am writing my Seed of Truth thread in the Homo Superior story, I try to make a point of making the value control to be deeper than just lust and sexual desire. Those play a...
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    On The Mechanics of Slave Magic.

    I hear you. My intention with this thread is to get the temperature of the room and see which forms of power fantasy most stimulate the prurient interest in the typical CHYOA reader, trying to gauge what interests other people. The macro socio-economic effects of such magics are what most...
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    On The Mechanics of Slave Magic.

    Suppose you are an adventurer/mage who has come across a sexy elf in the forest and since you come from a culture that encourages humans to use magic to bind non-humans, you proceed to successfully cast an enchantment and now are the proud owner of a newly enslaved elf. From the perspective of...
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    Portal Fiction Power Fantasy Protagonist Preference

    Try saying that three times fast :D. To quote my old writing professor, every story starts with a world, a character, and a quest. I have some ideas for a world that I want to explore through the eyes of a character, but I am not sure exactly what sort of character to make him. Part of me...
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    How do you prefer your Elves? As slaves or masters?

    I am sure that enslaved elves would encourage their human masters to invest in more robust creatures and leave the elves to jobs that they excel at, like looking pretty and singing songs. It probably helps that the ageless elves would have an easy time taking advantage of human nostalgia.
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    Matters of Perspective. Choosing a POV

    I have an idea for an F/m scene, but I am not sure whose viewpoint I want to take, which perspective seems more interesting?
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    How do you prefer your Elves? As slaves or masters?

    Half of all fantasy anime made in the last 10 years has some element of cute slave girls being compelled by magic to serve and obey the protagonist.
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    How do you prefer your Elves? As slaves or masters?

    Exactly. Slave societies like Sparta, Rome, and Dixie had to devote huge amounts of resources for preventing slaves from running away or rebelling. Slavery died out in large part because the costs of maintaining security over a hostile population is more than the price point of competitive...
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    How do you prefer your Elves? As slaves or masters?

    On the micro level, dealing with a case by case basis, breaking and taming monsters can make for good drama. But from macro level dealing with world building, a setting where slave rebellion is impossible and dutiful compliance to owners makes for an interesting societal structure.
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    How do you prefer your Elves? As slaves or masters?

    Agreed. Circumstances are paramount. Elves can range drastically in their power relative of their human counterparts. IMHO the most important factors include, but are not limited to... Relative birth rates, the differences in magical prowess, the intelligence of the elven rulers, the nature of...
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    How do you prefer your Elves? As slaves or masters?

    Scenario four is the most likely if the elves are not completely incompetent and the humans have no special slave magic. If the elves are incompetent and anger the humans so much that they turn conquering the elven kingdoms into a multigenerational crusade, then it is a toss up between one and...
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    How do you prefer your Elves? As slaves or masters?

    I feel like such elves would inevitably create a scenario 2 or 4, depending on the competence of the elven leaders and the aggressiveness of the humans. Either the humans would conquer the elves via attrition or the elves would subjugate the humans via subversion. Assuming neither side has...
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    How do you prefer your Elves? As slaves or masters?

    Thinking out loud here. But if I were a kingdom of elves dealing with humans, and assuming... 1. Elves live five to twenty five times longer than humans do. 2. Humans find elves to be beautiful and desirable as mates. 3. Elves have skills and talents honed over their long lifespans that make...
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    How do you prefer your Elves? As slaves or masters?

    I would assume that in scenario 1 and 2, humans have some kind of slave magic to bind non-humans to their will. In scenario 3, the elves have such magic. In scenario 4, the elves share the slave magic with humans.
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    How do you prefer your Elves? As slaves or masters?

    Which scenario do you prefer for your elves? 1. Elves are one of many slave races who have been bound to the service of mankind. They are forced to turn their superior bodies and magical prowess to the profit and pleasure of humanity alongside other monstergirls and demi-humans. 2. Elves...
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    Preferred form of Thrall

    You don't read my work, do you? I also get the impression that you have never read Game of Thrones. In my experience all of the best literature has an erotic element.
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    Preferred form of Thrall

    George RR Martin would disagree with that sentiment.
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    Preferred form of Thrall

    I am curious to know if you think I go "too far" with my interpretation of the Nano-mechanical Omniracial Xeno Enslavement Technology in my sci fi erotic space opera. https://chyoa.com/chapter/The-Voyages-of-The-Seed-of-Truth%3A-Contact%21.1634400
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