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Harem Hotel is in the mind control category, which is one of the ones that need a month old account to view. We have a story discord going here: https://discord.gg/AQhaU7zRFN

Keep in mind that you can write the backstories and all the interconnected elements of the world and not publish it. I have a character reference page for my own stories that is not on the site and never will be. I use it to help my character feel grounded in their actions and worldview even if...

That's happened to me tbh, I engaged with a writer about an idea and they made me an author just in case I wanted to write it.

OK I am up to 49 and finished the 2md and 3rd challenges so a good point for a second trip through the shredder. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Michael-Clark%2C-a-41-year-old-owner-of-a-struggling-firm.1137084 Hit me

Generally I will describe a person's outfit the first time they appear on the page having dressed themselves and then not do so otherwise until I want to draw attention to it.

My story Deep Cover is, in effect, my remake of the game Female Agent. I used to write for it and had a very different vibe in mind than Crush, so I picked it up and took it in my direction.

I'm generally not interested in perpetual stories, and when a story balloons that huge its a big signal to me that the author isn't planning to end it. So, I tend to ignore them.

Some of the most famous characters are unabashedly based on real people in the authors life. The Dude from The Big Lebowski is heavily based on Jeff Dowd. Kevin Smith wrote Chasing Amy about his relationship with Joey Lauren Adams, then cast her in the movie basically as herself. (Being the...

I thought about doing MM reviews, but my stories are extremely niche so no one would recognize my characters, and I found it hard to find a new angle that wasn't already covered in Gambio's review. *shrug*

I'll note I've added character pages to my long-form transformation story, so people can come back and remember what I've done to everyone.

Some multi-author stories just include the kinks in the branch title, like Spiral of a Curse: https://chyoa.com/story/The-Spiral-of-a-Curse.36727 (You should read Spiral of a Curse :P )

My suggestion would be to scrap 2 and 3 and just have them fork by long-form and short-form stories. From a reader perspective, whether the story starts on Tuesday or Friday means nothing, but knowing whether its a slowburn or a 2 chapter vignette would be relevant.

My girlfriend sucked 37 dicks! In a row?

Writing with code snippets in the middle of sentences always kinda broke the spell for me as a writer, and it limits how you can use names in the story. For example, in one of my stories the asshole villain keeps referring to the protagonist by a childish version of his name, which wouldn't work...

I'd be down with a ranking of "The Authors you Like Most, liked This." Naturally I tend to follow, favorite, and like the authors that are writing things that appeal to me, and they tend to follow, favorite, and like things that would also appeal to me. I've admitted to snooping through the...

This was made into a plot point by Harry Turtledove and Kurt Vonnegut, so you'd be in great company.

You can do both, that's the beauty of a CHYOA. I can understand if you want to have one feel like the "canon" ending, but TBH endings on CHYOA are novel enough that I don't think people would mind to find more than one.

"had come upon me" has entirely different connotations on CHYOA

If the story hasn't been updated, you should check the Author's profile to see if they are still active on the site. If its Moderated and they have left, the chapter won't get approved. If the author has left the site, there's a thread where you can ask Friedman to let you take it over.