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I lean towards showing them. Unless a reader is looking in the story map (which is a whole issue), they wouldn't even know there was another option to try. And if your story gets bugged, such that no option is valid, they might just think it dead ends and stop.

If Al fucked in my story I think Gina would have jumped through a pane glass window.

The only gaping asshole is Al, so I think we're good then.

Ok Al and Ruby put up their response. Maybe not my best work, but exactly as much effort as Marcie and Gina deserve ;)

It seems like those men would either become lords of their own sexual fiefdoms or be completely overrun by the others.

I got a similar vibe to Impregmaniac, it felt a little rushed and businesslike, but I also thought that was the point. They're both doing it for work. The dialogue at the end, though, where Matt and Alice make a date doesn't really fit IMO. Matt's done almost nothing through the scene that...

I think you're describing your personal notifications, showing engagement with your own stories. This thread is discussing the main page news feed (top center, just below the search bar), which is showing everyone's likes, all the time.

I've had 2 when I was involved in a collab situation and the other author checked out for whatever reason. But I think I've only had like 2 or 3 chapters ever posted to my branches by folks outside of that scenario, so I certainly can't wait on it.

It sounds like you have publisher's block, not writer's block.

I'd be ok with the news feed showing likes if it was curated at all. Perhaps likes of my followers and those who I follow.

There's only a story if the protagonist wants something and can't immediately have it. Either its something beyond their ability or its something their abilities cannot help with. You can have a superhuman stud as your protag, but the story needs to be about the one woman immune to his charm, or...

Are you asking which story to do a fanfic of? There are a ton with this premise or something like it: Being John Malkovich, Gamer, Get Out, Peacemaker, etc...

I'll be honest, this project seems way beyond the bounds of CHYOA. I think you'd be better served looking into TWINE or Rpgmaker or something similar to handle that scope.

I think the biggest immediate response is that people would recognize that someone has reality-altering power and immediately start searching for and attempting to control that person. If Tom *wasn't* obviously changed, he'd be the world's most wanted man.

Ok so I read the alternate start (Aga possesses Helen). Overall its very well-written and the scenes are structured well. I'm struggling to connect with the characters though, as both Aga and Adam are pretty reprehensible. I'm most interested in Helen's state of mind as she deals with someone...

You dropped a paragraph from your post about info dumps... because it was turning into an info dump?

I published the story Deep Cover this afternoon (https://chyoa.com/story/Deep-Cover.46376), and its listed as In Review. That makes sense, I understand you have to review first. However, it popped up in my recent activity and apparently pinged my followers, so a few folks have asked what...