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On a different note, weather and vernacular. Any place with a snowy season, *knows* about their snowy season. They think about it. The season is on the author's mind by default, and it's tough to step back from. Any outdoor scene, any coming in from the outdoor scene... The weather is real...

Good golly. Late here and only semi-back from retirement, but I'm genuinely saddened by the issues this fine site and the people behind it are facing. That list of banned words is genuinely crippling, and people never have and never will want to create an account in a porn site that they are...

I understand the impulse, but feel this takes the viewer out of the moment. You'll get more likes, people will understand you need likes to keep going... So there's a trade off. But, the overall quality will suffer. I guess I'm a purist. I would preserve the quality of my story.

Some common-ish or traditional American/English names that can hit the right note: Sam/Sammy as short for Samuel or Samantha Chris/Chrissy as short for Christopher and Christine Jordan as itself is fine Alex as short for Alexandra or Alexander Max/Maxy as short for Maxwell/Maximilian or...

For inspiration Keep in mind your character, though. Not everyone has the inclination or capacity to string 'em together like that : )

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They are certainly allowed, anything within the terms of service is allowed, but this isn't really an image hosting service. Why not use something like imagefap.com ?

It's looking likely that I will.

Three years is enough damn cred to throw you a fuckin' party, man*. *Or your gender reality or gender preference. Welcome. Party.

I know that it can be frustrating when I don't post for a week or sometimes even longer. Brother, my latest chapter took me three and a half months. A one and a half month break in there for holidays and general burnout. I couldn't go back to the way I used to casually write if I wanted to...

My wife and my close friends have access to my writings. Some relatives know I have the hobby, but don't know where I write or what I write specifically. ... What I write specifically is taboo as hell.

Occasionally The longer it's been since I've written it, the better.

I'm late, but welcome!

I tend to use some rough and fun onomatopoeias in this situation, and the suggestions here are solid for general description.

It's better for a new author to write sex. Go for it. Dive in. Get nasty. Figure out the characters you're using, and then figure out which of them are banging and why.

I think you're creating a problem where there isn't one. If CHYOA is treated as more of a suggestion than a rule, that should be okay. After all, the reader comes to the site... and chooses an adventure! Maybe they choose a very linear adventure. In that sense, we are all on an adventure...

Mostly, this guy asks for contributions and asks for input on his contributions. I'm guessing this was an awkward and off-putting introduction into that rabbit hole.

That user is an enthusiastic messenger. If you wish, if you go to their profile page, there's an option to 'ignore this user', in a drop-down by the 'follow' option. I'm not precisely sure what this function does, but I'd be surprised if it didn't block future messenges.

In similar vein, and something I'm trying to work in more, is you can use dialogue to bring up visual things in a sudden and strong way. "Did that bitch just slap herself with her own fucking tits?" Some frat douche laughed. Might be more powerful, and varied, and exaggerated, and pleasingly...

I hear this. If your characters have anything approaching more than one dimension, if you respect their integrity as a character, this can easily become a problem after some plot and time passes. Don't have a solution. I've pushed a couple of my characters further than I should have, with no...