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The connections can be large or small, but if we can't describe the emotion and convey the importance of the scene (setting as well as characters and action), I strongly believe (and agree) the erotica has no point. The investment has no point. This is an era of easy video and picture. The...

Yes and yes. Maybe. Beliefs are secondary to reality. Or, will result in thoughtful discussion of the merits of his study. His methodology and results were surely flawed, but concepts of subconscious and ego took the mind of an artist to rationally convey - and hold weight today. Good...

There are many lovely analyses of the Peach-Bowser-Mario triangle. Ive heard from more than one source that it's basically a big RP session between them. Regardless, go for it. Peach is a hot girl - perhaps a more classic damsel than any Disney princess.

I'd say with siblings, too - the power differences can be massive. Many, many (younger) siblings are legit abused and traumatized, bullied by (older) siblings without a hint of sex involved. Put sex in the mix, and it becomes potentially real... real sick. I probably don't need to get into how...

Personally, I think it takes away from the integrity of the character, to allow customization. No story is going to fool me into thinking I'm reading about myself and my best friend and some girl I know. I say let a character have their own personality, and identity. Now - one might say...

11 days in Kenya. No snowy Christmas this year!

Truth. Good erotica is its own artform - treat it as a craft, an art, and your own work as yours, if you want to be your best. I suppose that goes for anything you can create, where you care about the result and you have more freedom to work with than an assigned recipe and rote ingredient...

Write the genre and scenes you like. If you're into mainstream stuff, by all means do that. But if you're into some niche stuff, don't worry that it's too out there (as long as you can make it site-legal). If you're writing - you do you, your thing, what you want to see... whether thats a part...

I think the premise is solid for a DC universe story. It really is. Or could be. But - youre making things really hard on yourself. You're changing up a lot of fairly fundamental characters and stories. Now, that might be fine... if there's a reason or a story or stories you want to tell. But...

I'm pretty much laser focused on pounding my brain to a pulp for my current project.

I like the under duress shameful peep show/hidden camera angle, the temptation to look, the increasing familiarity... Some intrigue over a jump-their-bones incest story.

My lord, you're right!

Expanding further (as if its needed) - the speed and tempo should mean something to the voyeur. They should feel whether she's coming fast or slow. Humping should be a potential interest - whether it's her fingers or a sex toy or a household object - or a household object of some significance...

If it's voyeuristic, concentrate on the face and body. Of course concentrate on the genitals. Size, device, stretching, rhythm, motivation. But aside from that work in a breast grab, a thigh or tummy rub. And most of all her face - her brow and eyes and moans and mouth - her whole body' shaking...

I put a thread into Memoirs of a Minion that I remain proud of, even if I've functionally abandoned it. ... I realize that was not the question.

In the DK Country games its clearly established that the Kongs are capable of full language. I think the answer is a 'yes', without gray area. Smash those Nintendo girls. And Link, while you're at it.

I can't make any promises - but good luck! If you're trying hard and fixing mistakes, it'll improve your English writing skills, that's for sure. Link to the story?