Might be that. Funny thing is that they never quite got together in the first story. If I had to point out a main pairing on the first version,...
It's a curious pattern in this case, because I have other male characters, it only seems to happen when it's Victoria getting some action with...
Thinking about starting a path here as a side project to Azure Rocks Chronicles. It'd be written in first-person from Zack's perspective and the...
Alicia Lane "Yeah, I know what you mean," Alicia agreed. "A new love might be just what mom needs." Alicia finished drying herself and put on a...
Oh, I'm glad, then! The threesome scene with the Peppers should be fun, as would be the one with the older sister if you wanted to include her....
I really enjoyed the concept when you first posted the story, and the scenes with Katherine {gfriend1} and Shay are really good and well written....
Alicia Lane Alicia chuckled. "Don't be ridiculous, Mom isn't like us," she teased her sister. "But I do agree we might be able to find a...
Glenn tries to take advantage of Wolf D's blindness and weakness and aims a slash of his sword at the creature's neck. He hopes Liam and Nathaniel...
The locker room scene was to show how naive Victoria can be, and to establish she's becoming curious about sex, maybe I went a bit too far, but...
LOL, I've noticed that as well. I guess people just don't want to see her with anyone other than Zack.
So, I've brought the resolution to the bear costumes/mystery guy case in a book on Azure Rocks Chronicles. If you switch out the characters, it...
I, for one, enjoyed the scenes with the Don so far. The idea of Quistis and Tifa using sex to overcome situations is really great. I don't think...
Yeah, I remember it was quite tiresome to write that scene, lol. But it was nearly to the end considering what I was doing. Of course, you can...
Glad to see you around here, umbra. As I've always said, real life comes first. If by prologue you mean the other story, thanks! Although, it'll...
I've disabled the rich text editor on the settings menu. Then I had to edit the chapter and remove some additional characters that appeared, only...
Has the way to use italics changed? Using * * on new threads no longer works, and I've tried using _ _ as well and it didn't work too. Thanks!...
I'm looking forward to it as well. I've only started writing on CHYOA, but I already was a lurker on the old CHYOO.
That's the thing, johnhoftb, for me this is the canon story now, I'll be able to develop the characters so much more here. At The Cabin stays as a...
Rework is done, story is back to 'public'. I just wanted to give a better introduction to the characters, so I had to switch a few scenes around...
The cuckold trolls, as henrytemp said, were a few individuals who kept bugging writers on the story "The Afterparty" to delete threads that...
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