I've accidentally copy-pasted a link to CHYOA when meaning to link a friend to something completely SFW. Really want to start a "Bad Sex" story...
I know I like to give feedback to folks looking to improve their writing, but I don't pretend that my own fiction couldn't benefit from some...
"I broke the whole thing off."
I've been trying to split the difference with Lois Lane's Night Out - a lot of branching, but also moving the branches toward definite ends....
@Rubicon I'm not necessarily talking about length of time - that's a whole suspension-of-disbelief deal; once you get to wish-granting genies your...
I'll be interested to see where you go with it; personally I like even magical transformations to take a bit more time, let even accelerated...
728 chapters, which is not bad progress for a week. Currently we have seven full paths, all the way to 20 chapters, with End: Lois Needs The Dick...
@Peri2g has some excellent points. It's a tricky balance. A lot of CHYOA stories don't have any particular arc - there's no outline to them, they...
@8inchesandcounting First off, I want to congratulate you on the work so far with your games, you've obviously put a fair amount of work into not...
I might go for something a little more subtle, like Survivor: Shirts vs. Skins - enforced nudity on one group to heighten tensions, and allowing...
One of the things about a sex scene is that it doesn't have to involve penetration, and it doesn't have to continue until completion. Humans are...
712 chapters. Not going to be a good week, writing-wise - travel last weekend and travel this coming weekend. But it goes on, and the sitting at...
@BlanqSl8 Well, some basic observations first - The Endangered Gender is a fun concept, you have a fairly strong concept for the world and...
Keeping things fresh is a challenge, and I do often wonder if I'm getting stale - and I think it's probably a good maxim that if I'm bored trying...
Light side and dark side - I usually prefer sex-positive stuff, especially where people choice's makes them end up in sexual situations, but...
There's going to be overlap in a lot of categories - I've got a fan fiction story that has magic, sci fi, transformation, hypnosis, gender...
@geezermcpleezer I touched on a few points earlier in your feedback thread, but I'll try to go into a little more depth - and hopefully a couple...
Still dealing with the fetish-overload thing myself; all I can say is that I like variety and folks that care seriously about...
Using the Kinsey Scale is a nice touch. I'm not sure how "fantastic" you want to take the premise - hypnosis would sort of defeat the point, and...
It's a different premise - and I like sex-positive takes as a nice change of pace from all the rape & impregnation fic.
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