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    Spam messages?

    Hi all! I wanted to know if any of you have been having a similar experience as me. Over the last 2 weeks I've been getting email notifications that someone has sent me a message on CHYOA. I can see the title of the message, "Hey Sweetie" in the email heading but when I navigate to CHYOA...
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    Building interest in a story

    Oh ok I think I understand, there is truly so much more to bra sizes than I initially thought :confused: I appreciate your breakdown, it makes a lot of sense but I can also understand why many writers on CHYOA don't particularly pay mind to cup size and band size; it is a level of detail that...
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    Building interest in a story

    Ah I see that does make sense, thank you for that thread I will definitely save it as reference! From what I understand, I should be using terms like full, pert, shapely, warm, weighty, etc. as vague descriptions to allow the reader to form their own mental image instead of describing them as...
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    Building interest in a story

    Thank you for the feedback! I do agree I am quite impatient and am expecting results too early. However it is always good to get an outside look into how I am writing and what i can do better
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    Building interest in a story

    Thank you for the constructive feedback! I really do appreciate it! It's comforting to get an outside eye into what I've done wrong and what I could be doing better. Honestly the name John Doe was a place holder as I wanted to add the choose your name feature that CHYOA has but as time went on...
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    Building interest in a story

    Hey everyone, I've been updated my story "Possession Process" on a semi regular basis, at least twice a month. I often see on this forum that what matters more than views and likes is comments, but as it stands now I haven't received any comments or chapter to review. I was curious how other...
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