It's okay. I didn't mean to come off so strongly. I've just had people go out of their way to make me feel that I had to delete my stories before because they decided it was "wrong" for me to write them. I'm not over that.
Just don't tell them they're a bad person for writing it or that their passion is some immoral act that "hurts" others. That can seriously mess someone up real bad.
I don't think we should trust someone who messes with Yulia's mind like that. That mask could be a date rape drug that would allow Dahlia to rape Yulia.
Oh, I was on about a different fairy that crawled into an elf's butt. She's fine, the two made up.
Well, at least Muma has a real name and not a musical chord.
Wait, is it the specific area that is safe or can Yulia just grab a lantern and move the lantern area? Also, Yulia should still take precautions in case Muma tries to do the butt thing like that other fairy did.
Whichever one Marcie and Gina feel like. So far, only two branches have reached the ten chapters required.
edit: I've changed the titles of the opening chapters to give readers an idea of what to expect.