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Maybe I could remake the Redemption of Gina Walker. There are some plot beats that I think would have been better rearranged, though I cam overall happy with it. Though, I am nearly finished with the original. Writing has just been taking far longer than I thought it would.

Does it have Galadriel being spanked?

Oh, that would work. Maybe, but I've seen a lot of writers, often the ones claiming to have written a masterpiece and but it on something like Archive of our Own or Fanfiction.net, make that claim. "Oh, you so totally were supposed to find that character I kept shilling for annoying." I...

Those examples sound like the author is trying to pass a mistake off as a planned move. If they wanted to convey feeling muddled and confused, he could just say, "the protagonist felt muddled and confused." And who intentionally writes a sex scene badly? Oh, okay, I see your point. I've...

Constructive involves clearly explaining your reasoning behind the fault. If it was a commission for someone else, it might be a bit pointless to say anything. That said, some constructive criticism could still help the with future projects they might have. If he pulls that card, he's not a...

The romance one sounds like it can be combined with one of the others.

I've got a POV of seven different characters in one of my stories so two should be fine though I always start every perspective switch with; Gina's P.O.V. Susan's P.O.V. Marel's P.O.V. Marcie's P.O.V. Lindsey's P.O.V. Rina's P.O.V. Cutie's P.O.V. You should probably avoid having the same scene...

A shark girl found a glory hole and went into a frenzy, masturbating furiously as two other people fucked. Dolphingirl Calm Humiliation

A schoolgirl found a mysterious garden where she ended bound and ballgaged. City Sock College

Perhaps I should start going twenty chapters deep before I submit a request. That said, I didn't think this segment was half bad. There was some useful advice.

Is it really a crossover if Superman and Captain Marvel are from the same universe? Also, Captain Marvel is 12 so thats inappropriate.

Right now, I'm just focusing on the Redemption of Gina Walker. A large number of decisions I made (having seven POV characters, Lindsey turning out to be good all along, Rina being Gina's enemy, Cutie showing his dominant side, a beach arc, etc) were actually done for the sake of NOT ripping off...

I have a new submission. Well, its not actually that new. Like four months old. I haven't worked on it for two months because I've been busy with other things (turns out writing even a three chapter long beach arc is tough if its from seven POVs.). But the point is I have another story to submit...

Oh yeah, she's the main character of Cursed Punishment. Its a convenient public story if you wanna write about curses but don't wanna bother starting yet another such story.

I generally aim for at least 250 chapters. Is that there right amount? Should I aim for more?

It was originally going to be a separate path to Hard Candy where Gina ran into her former bully. But then I realised that the story I wanted to tell was going to be quite similar at first. I figured that instead of just copying Hard Candy for twenty chapters, I should instead create a branching...

I'd like to submit The Redemption of Gina Walker for Marcie and Gina's viewing pleasure.