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The archeologists of the future will have the exact opposite problem as the archeologist from our time. The job used to be about creating a view of a long gone world based on some minimalistic object... and make up theory about the hunting habits of Neanderthalers based on a single arrowhead...

I think this is the wrong place to ask such a question... only very, very few of the people here make any money at all with their writing, I'd say. So my guess is, you'll get a lot of "for myself" answers in this thread.

Great advice above! Some additions from my end: - Be consistent in tense! Basically, pick if you want past or present tense, and then stick to that. There's nothing more distracting for a reader than being thrown back and forth between tenses: "I ripped her shirt from her body. Her boobs look...

Thanks for your thoughtful comments! Heh, I didn't notice I used the wrong perspective, changed it to 1st person straight away! I don't have any ideas for branches right now, but when I do, they should split off from the main thread after a scene is completed... and since a scene spans several...

I'd appreciate any comments on this story: The Institute — CHYOA