Maybe I could remake the Redemption of Gina Walker. There are some plot beats that I think would have been better rearranged, though I cam overall...
Does it have Galadriel being spanked?
Looks like Gina's gonna have to start calling Marel, Flat-Tits.
Oh, that police show. My bad.
Do you mean that Rising of Shield Hero?
Oh, that would work. Maybe, but I've seen a lot of writers, often the ones claiming to have written a masterpiece and but it on something like...
Those examples sound like the author is trying to pass a mistake off as a planned move. If they wanted to convey feeling muddled and confused, he...
Constructive involves clearly explaining your reasoning behind the fault. If it was a commission for someone else, it might be a bit pointless to...
The romance one sounds like it can be combined with one of the others.
I intend to finish on my main path first before starting the second one. I have a good idea of where to start my second path and it's almost at...
Something similar happened in a story I'm writing. I planned to redeem a villainous character but it contradicted the ending I had planned (she...
I've got a POV of seven different characters in one of my stories so two should be fine though I always start every perspective switch with;...
A shark girl found a glory hole and went into a frenzy, masturbating furiously as two other people fucked. Dolphingirl Calm Humiliation
A schoolgirl found a mysterious garden where she ended bound and ballgaged. City Sock College
Perhaps I should start going twenty chapters deep before I submit a request. That said, I didn't think this segment was half bad. There was some...
Finally finished that Cursed Punishment beach arc. Now I can get on with the rest of the story.
If a dickgirl gets cucked is she a cuckold or a cuckquean?
Is it really a crossover if Superman and Captain Marvel are from the same universe? Also, Captain Marvel is 12 so thats inappropriate.
Right now, I'm just focusing on the Redemption of Gina Walker. A large number of decisions I made (having seven POV characters, Lindsey turning...
I have a new submission. Well, its not actually that new. Like four months old. I haven't worked on it for two months because I've been busy with...
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