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Hey all, I can't find a story I was checking out and forgot to bookmark or favorite, and it's driving me a bit nuts. I remember the basics were you were a step or real fahter, and the house was filled with your regular and extended family. There were a pair of twins male and female that were...

Thank you kindly. Can't believe I missed that.

I've bookmarked several chapters in my time here, which isn't that long, but for the life of me I can't figure out how to USE them. I know if I favorite a story I will get updates on new chapters, but sometimes I need to take a break and especially in big multi branch stories remembering where I...

Exactly, complaining about noncon in a noncon story is pointless, but those are the easiest comments to ignore. I also think that comments like that would bother an author the least, but that's me speaking for myself. But saying someone feels out of character, or that there is less sexual...

Commenters often don't know how to say how to do what is bothering them in a story better. All they know is what bothers them. It's best to be clear if possible, but under the assumption that comments aren't just a troll, or that your story isn't for them, then even those comments can be...

The another common term that a lot of writers use is plotter vs pantser. Plotter is self explanatory, pantser refers to writing by the seat of your pants, and seeing where it goes. Everyone is a mixture of both it seems and both have advantages and disadvantages. I do find with a current...

Of course, hence the mention of theme. If the story is about humiliating the main character, or the bully is the main character, or it's just PWP thing can and do change. But that was just an example. In your case the fantasy of the story is about not having moral limits, and the dubcon is the...

It's like, want the bully character to have a heart of gold? Maybe don't have him pop the cherry of the childhood best friend of the audience identification character in a scene of dubious at best consent, at least if that is not your theme. Gonna take a whole lot of work to make readers not...

If you have trouble recieving criticism, just remember that anyone posting actual constructive criticism cares enough about your work to do so. If your work bored someone to tears, they wouldn't mention specific issues with a work, or better said even if they did there had to be some spark...