The cup size after D and before E.
If only my teachers shared your liberalism.
The problem I have, in general, with Free Use and other similar concepts(the purge movies, for example) isn't the fetish(which I think is hot as...
Not just stuff like this, game stories basically disable the story map, or the use of the back button. Leaving you having to restart the "game"...
If you're referring to the conditional branches page, all that might as well be greek.
Love your work, I wish you were writing something about a universe I cared about, that's about my only critique.
Honestly, I think game stories are annoying, and I already can't figure out what the fuck the variable shit does.
For the novelty of seeing finished work on this site. Small bites increases odds of that happening by an awful lot. I could just waive the cap,...
The pitch would be we'd all come up with short (10-chapter or so maximum) short-stories that revolve around the aforementioned gloryhole, in a...
The heart of our lust comes from taboo. The more you hide an object of desire, the more I will desire it. If I see them everyday, I will move on...
Breast feeding sure, and that is the hook, but I wouldn't call that transformation scene "sexy" more like horror porn if anything. Fair enough, I...
Nothing per say. I think voting would be better, personally.
I'll look through your work a bit more and give you a better critique tomorrow. I think I can help in one regard though. The img/.gif code is...
This is fine for your uses. But a hallway bang in the opening just comes off as filler you could have spent developing characters readers will...
Skimming through, if you're verbose, I'm positively loquacious. Think I've cracked 2k words multiple times. If anything, I think you could stand...
I mean, yes. But blank slates are intimidating to most people, I don't write a word of Annika with a blank slate. Gatekeeper's character and where...
I'm completely spitballing, atm. And am open to pretty much anything if there's enough interest.
This is honestly letting the tail wag the dog. Yes you should have a theme in mind. But the order of operations should be...
I've been kicking this around for a week or so, as a way to maybe shoot up forum participation/give writers a goal to shoot for, besides SotW....
The way you get me to write for you is to pay me monies, or give me many happy endings. Those are the two currencies I trade in, filled tissues,...
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