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  1. raziel83

    Also thought of making the MC a woman, but now I fear again that I have violated too many core...

    Also thought of making the MC a woman, but now I fear again that I have violated too many core concepts of mind control stories and this cost me most of the potential readers.
  2. raziel83

    So far I've been pondering about making the story be about "classic" fictional hypnosis. A slow...

    So far I've been pondering about making the story be about "classic" fictional hypnosis. A slow process that is slow means that the subject is either willing or somehow captive for a period of time. That works as a limiter to what they can do even if they get power hungry.
  3. raziel83

    Trying to think of a way to write a mind control story without it immediately going to rampage...

    Trying to think of a way to write a mind control story without it immediately going to rampage with unlimited powers.
  4. raziel83

    (Story idea)Ransom to pay back

    Yet another reason why I prefer corruption stories where the corruption bit is slow paced, not immediate. I do think that "I made an oath" is a good excuse, especially if they thought that getting the money would be as easy as going back and asking their family/allies to provide it, but then...
  5. raziel83

    (Story idea)Ransom to pay back

    I think it is an interesting twist that basically her honour is what forces her to try to earn the money. This could mean that if she is desperate enough, she might feel obliged to do some things that are normally abhorrent to her, if this is the only way she thinks she can make the money and...
  6. raziel83

    "huh? Usually these things get bigger when I'm licking them. But this sure does taste good."

    "huh? Usually these things get bigger when I'm licking them. But this sure does taste good."
  7. raziel83

    Harem Shenanigans

    On the Discord it was suggested that the lesbian princess makes a deal with the emperor where both try to keep the other's secret and she helps teach the emperor how to please women.
  8. raziel83

    Harem Shenanigans

    I think the harem thing is a tradition that predates him and he is obliged to follow it. Perhaps he was too focused on other aspects of running the empire and waging a war on multiple fronts to bring peace to his region that he didn't read the documents he was sending out for formal surrender...
  9. raziel83

    Harem Shenanigans

    An idea that I already put out on the Discord as well. Harem story but it is about an actual harem. Fantasy/SCIFI -Alexander the Great has finished uniting the continent / region of galaxy and can finally return home to rest and rule over a peaceful empire. But now he has a harem made up of...
  10. raziel83

    Bad Halloween Story Ideas

    Only if I also had the energy to write them out.
  11. raziel83

    Bad Halloween Story Ideas

    This is NOT in the funeral etiquette! As the family and servants gather for the funeral of dearly beloved (cruel tyrant) Countess Evgenia Chernysnov (mainly they are just making sure that the old bitch is finally dead and that the next generation can put their claws into her vast riches and...
  12. raziel83

    Corruption of a Queen

    The possession version would also mean that I would put the POV on the queen specifically. Because then we get her inner thoughts and see how she goes from "good intentions" to "oh, I really shouldn't do this but I must" to "oh wow, this is actually amazing."
  13. raziel83

    Bad Halloween Story Ideas

    I might try to write it.
  14. raziel83

    Corruption of a Queen

    The queen's fall would be gradual. At first she's only sacrificing herself for the sake of her child and kingdom. Later when the queen struggles to defeat her enemies the daemon demands more sacrifices to make her stronger and with her new succubus powers she drains traitors loyal to the new...
  15. raziel83

    XCOM : The Enemy Fucks Back.

    The only way to do a competitive story is with rules and referees and open dice rolls or whatever RNG to determine winners. And you really do need a referee to remove or just block posts that don't fit in due to rules violation or general asshattery.
  16. raziel83

    XCOM : The Enemy Fucks Back.

    YOUR rookie who panicked because they saw an alien dick and then opened fire on friendlies. AND I ONLY TOOK HIM ON THIS MISSION TO TRAIN HIM UP AND REPLACE THE LOST EXPERIENCED TROOPS! YOU ARE MAKING THE SITUATION WORSE!!!!! ...No, I'm not upset. Why do you ask?
  17. raziel83

    XCOM : The Enemy Fucks Back.

    The one who cums first, loses?
  18. raziel83

    I've got the inspiration for some snuff&non-con theme thing, but that would obviously not work...

    I've got the inspiration for some snuff&non-con theme thing, but that would obviously not work on this site...
  19. raziel83

    I think sometimes the speaker tags are a nice way to get across some things, but these should be...

    I think sometimes the speaker tags are a nice way to get across some things, but these should be used in moderation so that every quote isn't surrounded by twice the number of words that could have been replaced by just writing the quote in a more descriptive manner.
  20. raziel83

    Violence in medieval fantasy

    It is a bit annoying that some of the story ideas I have had, I can't put on CHYOA just because I would have to basically skip the action scenes due to the violence restriction. But I haven't found a site that would fill the niche that CHYOA does, so I'll just focus on other concepts.
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