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  1. Deadedge

    Come and post your opening lines...

    This is from the very first story I ever posted on CHYOA. It makes me laugh. It's hot as shit and my dick's hard. It aint right but I can't help it. Even though she's asleep I try not to stare. Mom's laid out on the couch in a loose red, sleeveless shirt. Well it's mostly loose. It's a bit...
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    When you know you fucked a minor plot point up and it bugs you.

    That is honestly one of the things I always need to put down in my separate character descriptions otherwise every scene featuring their genitals will have this fuzzy (or not) question mark hanging over it.
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    Bad Halloween Story Ideas

    Superkinky "Are you sure about this, Lois?" Clark had to ask one last time, uncertain and more than a little wary of the whole thing. "Oh God yes, Smallville," breathed the reporter, already rosy cheeked with arousal, kneeling on the edge of their bed with her legs spread wide. He could smell...
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    What would you like to see in a Time Travel plot?

    Ah thanks. I might take some time to fill that out...
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    What would you like to see in a Time Travel plot?

    Where do I pre-order this book?
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    Bad Halloween Story Ideas

    I need to see all three of these as full blown choose your own adventures! It's the franchise we've been waiting for!
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    What would you like to see in a Time Travel plot?

    Another use of the timetravel mechanic (depending on its implementation) could be as an info-gathering tool, so going back in time to actually figure out how each woman's past has shaped their current likes, dislikes and kinks, then using that information back in the future to win the MILFs...
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    What would you like to see in a Time Travel plot?

    That's another model emulating the Marilyn Monroe photo: As for time travel stories I'm often more interested in finding out what the time travel rules are for a particular story, and how it explores paradoxes and the maleability of the timeline.
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    Bad Halloween Story Ideas

    Wereman Juliet was always the girliest girl, slim and pretty with soft blonde hair and bits that jiggled and bounced when she tiptoed around her little town. Then one night she was bitten by some crazed hobo right on the leg! Luckily she escaped and her roommate (a nurse) made sure everything...
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    Bad Halloween Story Ideas

    Son of a Lich You died, and while your funeral was sombre and solemn, you noticed that your mother wasn't all that upset about the whole thing. That was strange. It was also strange that you, being the one who was the deceased, were still able to notice things. Ah, you remember now. The woman...
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    Category Suggestions

    Fan-fic I think is too broad a term to be a 'category' in my mind. It's more like... a story type, or something. What I mean is, if someone writes a fan-fic based on Lord of the Rings, it's more descriptive for it to be categorized in some sort of 'fantasy' category. Something like Harry Potter...
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    Bad Halloween Story Ideas

    Well those are excellent and hilariously horrific. I'll have a go! Fleshlights Don't Bite? Aaron visits an occult novelty store of all places and ends up buying a fleshlight from a rather compelling shopkeeper (like a sexy witch with green eye-shadow type). Armed with some gently warming lube...
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    Improvement in messaging system

    Tangentially: There's an unofficial discord server some folks are using for some less formal chats if you're interested in a slice of the community - https://discord.com/channels/731875588465360898/749633368890802176
  14. Deadedge

    I plan, you write? Maybe?

    I wish I never read this sentence.
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    Bad Endings

    Endings motivate me to write a story. That is if I can think of one... One of the reasons so few of my contributions been branching stories is probably because endings are sometimes so daunting. I'm one of those authors on the site who loves starting new stories... but often without having...
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    Feeling very dissatisfied with my writing

    Proofing and editing can be tough, though generally I like doing it a lot. I think most of us can empathise with that whole process of writing a piece that excites you in some way (be it feeling you wrote something well, or you've finally gotten to a interesting point of the story, or that...
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    Reading your own stories

    I'm my biggest fan. And like any fandom, obsessive, contradictory, toxic, weirdly forgiving and spending way too much time on it. (tbh I'm not very critical of my own work in any way that's down on myself so it's a pretty healthy fandom imo.)
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    Do you feel like you make it too obvious which characters are your favorite?

    My favourite character in one of my stories right now is an inanimate object, so. I think there's always fun to to be found in writing any character, even if they're not going to play a huge part in the greater story. Sometimes they start to take on a life of their own, like this person (or...
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    Personal Disagreements with The so called Rules of Grammar

    On the topic of using 'said' specifically, I think people conflate how 'distracting' this word really is. To the point where trying to avoid using 'said' in a piece of text becomes detrimental to the meaning and pacing of a written conversation. Like @insternamehere said, pick up any published...
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    I looked, I glanced at, then I turned my attention to...

    Also a good idea. Thanks!
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