Heyo, I wrote "Seminar sex" https://chyoa.com/story/Seminar-sex.10863 Would love to hear some feedback on it. Anything really. You can point out...
I added a little bit to it now, hope that's more inciting to read on.
Thank you! I have to admit, the introduction is weak. I just didn't know whatelse to write since every path from there on is basically it's own...
Hey, I'm the writer of "Friends" https://chyoa.com/story/Friends.10933 I'm just looking for feedback on my writing. Like, is it easy to read,...
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