I have many dangling threads over many years as a Chyoo/Chyoa author, and part of how I keep them alive is to cue myself by revisiting details,...
oops I double-replied; but I said more this time!
I've been enjoying your chapters and the occasional side paths and alternate endings. As far as my advice, I enjoy your writing and you should...
Here's a relationship diagram/family tree for Lucy's Portion as of the first chapter. As descriptive text, I might summarize it thus: Lord Jeremy...
@fineous63 Thanks for your interest and a character page and/or family tree for Lucy and Annie is probably in order. Lucy is Jeremy Netherwood's...
Ouch! Glad to hear you're easing back in with writing.
I've enjoyed following The Valley of Mists, though I haven't been following closely. I like characterization and interaction. It's been...
I am delighted to hear your progress on your own special academy.
You are absolutely welcome to take the format and rules as the start of a new Chyoa story if you want to run your own (re "the go-ahead") AND I...
Sounds like fun, and now I have to look up Black Closet.
Apologies for the slow reply, I am on the story site more often than the forums.
Yes. Do you have some academy ideas in mind?
The "San Francisco Lesbians" series (1993-, Michaela Regius, Carol Queen, etc.) is pretty much real-life partners/play-friends, as I understand,...
Historical "materia medica" picture of Zingiber officinale, my herbal namesake. Spicy underground growth. It replaces a "naughty gingerbread...
Co-operative businesses like, for example, a feminist bookstore collective, can have pretty fierce internal politics, leading to a split or a...
I like where you've landed. A given polycule, like the one in your story, has dynamics that keep the members together despite points of...
A set-up for episodic stories of a few chapters, then another episode with different characters or activities, could be that the main characters...
I'm a little surprised to hear that, because it looks at first glance like a personal web crawl of a story or just the story map page would work.
@Dansak I managed to trip over the "heritage" one, with Tamara the nail salon artist and Tamara the college student daughter of a doctor and...
"Attaining Tenure" is a really remarkable use of game mode. My only game-based story is Lusty Magical Academy, based closely on @SwampThing 's...
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