thanks for the feedback. What made that chapter stand out? Why were the other ones boring?
I'm never sure on the exact definition of a "cuckold fetish". Is it a man who openly enjoys his partner having sex with other men and encourages...
The next fork will either be: An ENF theme coming off from "The Morning" (https://chyoa.com/chapter/The-Morning.987783) Laurie either goes...
Pardon me resurrecting this. I've now finished what will probably be the main thread of this story. I'll be now adding decisions and the branches...
More chapters now, but I am afraid it will be a little slow in bringing in decisions - I'm trying to make sure each thread is finished before I...
Thanks for that - super helpful, especially regarding Alex's phone call and differentiating Dan and Josh - I will try to rework those.
feedback especially welcome on coherence and story telling: this is the first thing I have written!
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