I'll give you a sick song to go with your sickness (No, it's not Disturbed, yes, I have lame music preference compared to others lol)....
How about 2 alternate realities where the main character is somehow transferred from their "normal" reality into this new reality where they are...
I suppose between those two options, I prefer the first.
Haha! My guesswork is unprecedented!
@Araon How about a story where the population of a given world all live in a tropical geographic and everyone is nude, but the MC is uncomfortable...
Police Radio: "We got ah... a potential P&Q over on Rosedale Avenue, somebody wanna go check that out... over." 2nd Police Radio: "P&Q?... Gonna...
I'll say it again, great story, quite enjoying reading it! I did comment in the section prior to coming here to check the forums, but I would...
Lol, I love that we need this disclaimer. ;)
Also, any that come to a forum from Reddit are more likely to have productive contributions. :)
I could see this being an interesting story to write. You have a lot of the structure in place already, so you get to focus more on character...
I would second being able to edit my own comments. There have been times where I've made a comment, then had to make another comment to make a...
"Bowser, tonight that plumber, his brother and all their friends and racing in a tournament... don't you think that's somewhat suspicious?" "Not...
Thanks, I'm going to look into this. Much appreciated.
@Zeebop Apologies if I murder this response... still very new to posting on forums. I began writing in Word and have pasted over to the site....
I wouldn't mind some feedback to help me improve. If anyone has suggestions, I would gladly consider them.
Not to downplay the questions asked and answers provided. I read this post and appreciated all the responses... I just wanted to second this hehe. :)
From the reader's perspective... If I'm not invested in the MC, I'm not likely to be very interested in the story. I still enjoy reading through...
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