avatar: the last airbender

So now that I’ve broken the 10k viewers mark and made it to chapter 8 of the story (chapter 16 if you wanna count additional stuff from myself and another author) I was curious as to what you all thought of it so far. Any suggestions? Comments? Anything you’d like to see in particular...

Hello, everybody. I feel a bit weird doing this, but I've really been into writing my own stories lately. I've started posting on CHYOA myself, and I have to admit I'm quite fond of it! Really enjoyed writing my second story so far on here, but I wanted to see if there would be any feedback...