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https://chyoa.com/chapter/Introduction.567756 https://chyoa.com/story/Real-Waifus-Bang-You-CYOA.25075 Tell me how you feel about them. Note: I will be updating RWBY CYOA in the next few days so no it's not dead.

Hey everybody, For some reason my new story is displayed (at least for me) as if it only has one chapter. However, it's quite larger, with Part 1 being almost 10k words. I was kinda hoping to get some feedback for part two, so anything would be really helpful. Here's the story's logline: As a...