domination

I feel a little uncertain if I should be claiming this story, since I'm not sure the original author is still around in some capacity or not. But they apparently have not posted or liked anything in over two years and I've been the one getting the notifications for approving new chapters so I...

Hello, I'd really appreciate if people gave me feedback on how to improve Time, Space, Magic. https://chyoa.com/story/Time%2C-Space%2C-Magic.11470 Thanks.

I’m writing a story/game, the first piece of erotica I’ve ever written, about femdom and sexfighting. It’s about about a new up-and-comer in a fictional erotic fighting league who’s randomly selected to take on the champion in a match for charity, and gets dominated both physically and sexually...