grammar

Hey guys, my brain feels kind of gripped lately. I was trying to decide what's best to use when writing from a 3d person PoV but I can't seem to focus enough to solve the matters by myself, so here I am. Just for example: Yes, this girl, she was actually gorgeous, more pretty of any of the...

I'll admit that my spelling and grammar are terrible and my vocabulary is not much better. English maybe my mother tongue but if it wasn't for spell checkers i'd not be able to write. On CHYOA i have a tendency to write in the first person, sometimes in the third and with my Vanilla stuff it's...