thriller

I have some vague ideas about a story centering about Beautiful Gorgeous but would like some help. My base idea is an Alternate Universe where Beautiful Gorgeous is being chased by spies who are hunky muscular men and she must take down the head of their organization so she travels around...

I recently adopted this story and I'm interested in feedback https://chyoa.com/story/All%27s-fair-in-love-and-war.4919