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Hello everyone. This is the feedback thread for my fantasy story, A Demon's Revenge. To begin, you can read it here: https://chyoa.com/story/A-Demon%27s-Revenge.32255 A little bit about the story; It is a fantasy story set in a world with demons, monsters and magic. The principle characters...

Hi, all, this is the story feedback thread for My Wife, His Girlfriend which you can read here: https://chyoa.com/story/My-Wife%2C-His-Girlfriend.32252 I'd like to hear what you all think of it. Any general thoughts, ideas on how it could be improved or suggestions of where you want the story...