Hello everyone, i'm fairly new at using the forums to communicate but i thought it would be a good idea if i could maybe present my new story here to get some feedback, it seems that my story is relatively popular and it gets views but there is a lack of comments that sometimes discourages me when i try to write, it feels like i'm going at it blind without any knowledge of how my audience feels about the story so here i am trying to get some feedback, i really want to hear any opinion, if it's criticism is okay, i just want to know what people think about the story. If you want to know the basic premise Lusty Kingdom is my new fantasy story based on basically everything (hentai monster girls, fantasy cities, all types of fantastical creatures and pretty much all sorts of characters with unique personality and sexual traits), there are different stories you can choose to follow (one of them being an adaptation to a game with lots of options), i really tried to have a nice structure specially with the main story so i have separated it in acts and chapters to help the pacing. I would say it has a fast pace as it contains lots of early sex scenes (which are marked with a heart ♡ for anyone who just wants to read them) but it is also very rich with its characters and plot, there are so many things that is better for you to read it instead of me trying to explain it. So anyways, here it is: https://chyoa.com/story/♡《Lusty-Kingdom》♡.32146 Check it out and leave a comment to let me know what you think, i really appreciate any feedback so i will value literally everything, even if is just poiting out a typo (i'm that desperate for comments lmao), if you check it out, thank you and have a nice day
