10 to 1

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by LizardGod, Apr 28, 2017.

  1. LizardGod

    LizardGod Really Really Experienced

    https://chyoa.com/story/10-to-1.11246

    So I am kind of at the point where I have so many threads going that I am having trouble deciding which threads to focus on.

    Kind of wondering if it is better to focus on a single thread then double back or try and keep everything even?

    Otherwise there are obviously a lot of places this could go.
     
  2. TheDespaxas

    TheDespaxas Really Really Experienced

    If you ever figure it out give me the answer.

    Going too much linear can bore some readers that like the choices but trying to keep it all equal goes slowly in each branch and adds an exponentially greater number of chapters to write.

    From what I have read so far the story is really nice and I can't wait to read more.

    A way to reduce the numbers of chapters is to have either clear dead ends or to link back up after choices that have no consequences on the story.
     
  3. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Agreed, it's a great story, but I wish there was more nookie...