You've obviously put a lot of work and effort into it so far, and that shows: the statistics all seem to work, the looping paths and conditional branches are all operational as far as I can tell. Big issue now is pushing the plot forward; the boss path is filled out, but "Running Into A Friend" dead-ends early. Maybe consider adding a few more options to the party - ones that appeal to the fetishes from character creation (spin the bottle with the daughter, a sexually aggressive woman in a Halloween outfit, etc.)
