I've read chapters by you before, and this is a solid stuff as usual. My main crticism is that this is literally just a carbon copy of Blowjob Universe, from the death/heaven setup and the focus on throat fucking, right down to the slightly memey tone. Good artists copy and great artists steal, but they usually try to do at least something a little different. Also, my vote is for splattering, but against cleaning. What are free use little sisters for, after all?
