https://chyoa.com/story/A-Good-View.37586 So I am several chapters deep on two different paths. I just wanted some feedback on the style so far before I get too much writing done. Firstly: POV Is the 2nd person POV working here? I know it fits with the "Choose your own adventure" style but I'm not sure I'm skilled enough to pull it off. Second: Switching Characters. I have written the 1st path (and soon the 2nd path) from both sides of the action. His thoughts and hers. Is this working? Do you enjoy reading both sides, or is one side much more fun to read? Please provide all feedback and tell me what you do and don't like. Also taking any suggestions for how any path continues.
1. 2nd person PoV working for me. You'll want to double check because some of the chapters are inconsistent (starting "You" and ending "I"). 2. Girl PoV working for me. Maybe you want to have Girl PoV be "I" vs. Boy PoV being "You" ?
