Hi, I'm working a new project lately. It a story about a haunted house where witch demon and trickster can be found. The story began with a group of student stopping for the night in hope of winning 25 000$ if they spend the night there. The story will follow the member of the group as they explore the house and try to evade the traps set for them. I'm looking for ideas for bad end. Where one member of the group fall to a trap or a demon and is change to something. I'm listening to any suggestion. The maid bad end is already written. I'm thinking of releasing the first few chapters this weeksor next.
The story is written with a third person view and will contain many fetishes including costume, bondage, transformation, erotic coupling at first, probably gender-bender, definitely some bimbofication. I don't know if my writing ability will be good enough, but I would like to mix horror-erotic in the mix. My main inspiration is movies like Demon nights series. I hope it answers your question.
So if one of the protagonists walk into a trap, they undergo a transformation (either their mind or their body) or get bound? So every branch is going to be a bad end, isn't it? Who does pay the prize money? A TV production or is it a promise of the supernatural creatures of the house to lure victims?
I don't know what my opinion is worth and you probably already have your own idea how things are going to go..., but here's the way I see it. So they all get lured to one place for highly specific reasons? Okay. That's a thing that happens. But then that would mean the big (possibly)evil person probably can't leave where they are, if it's necessary to bring people to them. So someone had to be helping, meaning that one of those students is all best friends or a pawn for whatever super magical force. Somebody is being a dick.
First of all, the 25 000$ is only a pretext to lure the students in the mansion. The master needs people to come in the mansion on their own free will he can't coerce somebody to enter. The master and his minion live in the realm of lust. Second, I have an idea for a fourth character, that person received an invitation to become a new witch for the master but must bring new souls to the manor. There will be bad ends in every branch, but I'm thinking to have a good end too or at least where some of the characters remain in control and have an advantage after the transformation.
You know, I never really got the whole "Transformation is a bad ending." type thing. I mean like unless your being controlled or whatnot, but otherwise....like, what's even the problem? Maybe I'm alone in thinking this, but....if you were given the option to change into something better, wouldn't you want to do it? "Oh no, I'm now part werewolf and will be cursed with super strength, speed and a longerlife span!" Like yeah. I never got that whole thing in books or movies. "Oh god! I've been turned into a badass dragon monster that's nigh invincible!" I dunno. Like don't get me wrong. I like own body a fair bit, but in some games it just seems silly that everything that makes someone slightly different has to be seen as some type of curse when all it usually does is make them better than normal people.
I understand what you're saying and share some your thought. In a story-telling point of view, I don't want to continue the story after the transformation and the goal of the character is to pass the trial of lust. I'm my point of view if they are trapped in the mansion because of a transformation I call it bad end, but it's really bad more of a new beginning for the character. I just don't want continue on this track. If eventually, other writers want to explore some path after a transformation I would gladly read them and publish them. I plan some path to continue after a transformation. An example I intend one of the character to be transformed in a succubus and continue the story as the hunter and not the prey anymore.
