Hi all, This is my first try at writing an erotica, if you guys have the time please take a look. Also if you have any ideas on the how the story should develop, feel free to let me know or you can add your own threads. Thanks
I would consider deleting that thread re: making the space pirate captain a 20 y.o., since you believe that it's essentially a dead-end. I think having her be of legal drinking age, at the very least, would be more appropriate for this particular story. Otherwise, it's a good concept, even though I don't have any ideas for this particular story myself.
Wrote a thread to offer on the young Captain storyline. I figured that showing her interacting with different crew members and remembering her father might be a way in. Though the touchy drive core may limit her options for a while.
I will adding threads at least once a week from now on, but since this is an interactive story, I would love some comments as to whose view I should continue next, or if you want the main character or others to do something, leave a comment. Thanks!
