A witchy girlfriend

Hi,

This is the thread for discussing my newest story.

https://chyoa.com/story/My-Witchy-Girlfriend.14087

A bit late for Halloween, I know, but enjoy

 

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It's actually better than your older work, I'm impressed. My one gripe is that the pictures really detract from the story.

 

Thanks! What do you like the most so far?

 

I think the way you play with the reader's preconceived notions by having the MC already be aware that his girlfriend is a witch.