A Woman Scorned - Looking for Contributors

Discussion in 'Authors' Hangout' started by LizardGod, May 16, 2017.

  1. LizardGod

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    https://chyoa.com/chapter/Introduction.333527

    So this is a little story idea I had that I have been wanting to work on.

    Basically a tale of a housewife who decided to get even with her cheating husband. I originally planned to do it as a collection of short threads with clear endings(namely the husband being humiliated in some fashion) of course it has not quite turned out like that.

    So I was wondering if there was anyone who would be interested in adding to this story.
     
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  2. Artican

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    I'll give it a go. I've got an idea on something to add.
     
  3. Artican

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    So... what is the name of the protagonist?
     
  4. LizardGod

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    Lets go with Jane.

    I tend to leave the name vague, hence forgetting to write it down.
     
  5. Artican

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    It would help to have a name at least to go off of. I don't like to name other people's characters. First name, last name and important character descriptions and traits will help to keep the story streamlined with multiple writers. It's hard to refer to characters without these and consistency is key for suspension of belief.

    Also, maybe you could add in one of those custom bars for first name and last name if you want to keep it vague. That way the reader can decide on a name.
     
    Last edited: May 20, 2017
  6. LizardGod

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    Ok, so I have updated some stuff, I started the story on a whim, hence the lack of details.
    In terms of how the main character looks I am using the story image as my reference for her looks.
     
  7. Artican

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    Cool, I can work with that.