Link: Art School Daughter Hi everyone, first time writer here of ficton of length - I really liked caption writing prior and published my first story here, really appreciate any feedback. This post does have spoilers to the story so advised to read it first. - Stated goal is knocking up the 4 main girls, this may not be achievable for user if certain decisions are made. - Stage 1 of story is about setup characters, gather a few items and get to Campus. - Stage 2 has decision area to approach each girl's story lines individually. All items gathered in Stage 1 can drive opportunities with the girls. At first, they can only get a hold of the 2 characters the protagonist hasn't met before, Chloe and Lindsey. Chloe: End of Chloe's chapters are a bit more romantic as you get to know her. Then you get confronted, continue romance and get 3some with Kylie but lose opportunity with other girls. If you end up not taking that offer, she will periodically pop into the story or message you as a lover or an angry stalker depending on how you left. Lindsey: While I started her as a tattoo tattoo troubled girl, she does become sweeter and you have to confront her unofficial boyfriend. He will harass you throughout the story and mess things up based on decisions. Breanne: Kylie best friend who you can knock up before Campus. Not sure what to do with her if you do, shorter story and interaction with others or just keep on banging. Kylie: Main girl, saving for last in story unless you take Chloe's offer for a seperate ending.
The Chloe path is very very nice and romantic. If Kylie is added, having it continue the romantic tone would be excellent. Like a threesome where all three spend their time in the house just making love to each other.
