https://chyoa.com/story/Boarding-School.9233 is my story. I want to know what you guys think and how it could develop. I think my main mistake is trying to branch it out from the start. It's mostly been me and my boyfriend working on some fantasies of mine and reenacting them and then recreating them through text. We sometimes are a bit too drunk when we write, hence why sincerest apologies if there are mistakes. The "Go to class" section is almost finished. It's, in general, a WIP. Hope we can make you guys cum! And please, give us advice on how to make the stories better. Should we limit it to a single story branch? Should we try to expand on the different storylines in a separate story? P.S: All the stories are fiction. Despite some of it happening to me, most of it is just fantasy inspired by actions delivered on me from the past. Please be kind in your criticism. P.P.S: First story so please don't be too mean :c
LittleDeepthroater, This is a brilliant story! Unfortunately I don't think you will receive the feedback your looking for on the forum, people are in general, not too active in discussing stories, unless they want to critizise something, or if they are actively contributing / collaborating. The favorites and likes are, more or less, the real feedback, and it looks as if your story is doing fine in that regard. I would only echo the words of the only comment on the story so far but otherwise a brilliant story and keep it up
