Bread School

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Raiga, Jun 10, 2015.

  1. Raiga

    Raiga Virgin

    Hello everyone. Post any feedback to Bread School here, including ideas you'd like to see by other writers or myself.
     
  2. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    Looks like things are just starting. Adding a link.


    Maybe more hints about what makes this school special or what skills it teaches? Why they offered the main character a full scholarship? What its name means?

    The main character seems desperately happy for the scholarship, senses the school is odd and doesn't really know what it teaches, but does not investigate. Any reason why?