Breaking the Paladin

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Hvast, Jan 25, 2020.

  1. Hvast

    Hvast Really Really Experienced

    I have finally started reviving this old classic. Editing my pre-chyoa chapters is a slow, painful, and cringe-inducing process but I always loved the premise of this story and hated seeing it lying dormant for years.

    Feedback is very welcome
     
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  2. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Link?
     
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    Regin34 CHYOA Guru

  4. Hvast

    Hvast Really Really Experienced

    Half a year later...

    Did some editing here and there. I still need to tackle the largest branch that has something like 50 chapters written by younger me. I had way too much free time back then :D
     
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