Hi, hola, Hallo, and whatever your language's equivalent is. My name is TwiceAsSmart (I know, I'm so humble to limit my genius to just twice) and I wanted to hear some feedback on my story. https://chyoa.com/story/Buster-Stone-Rapes-The-World.13061 I'm not going to pretend its the best story in the world, but I think its a good start. I know the orthography is probably horrible and I constantly change tenses like a mad man, but I'll try to edit those bits on the weekend.
