Catgirl Maids vs. Sissy Slaves

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Gambio, Jun 29, 2022.

  1. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Hello there

    My story got over 9000 views, which seems an opportune moment to create a thread

    https://chyoa.com/story/Catgirl-Maids-vs--Sissy-Slaves.44641


    This is the part where you are supposed to sell your story, but the title pretty much sums it up already.

    So, here's a picture of the two main characters instead:

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  2. Pasin

    Pasin Really Experienced

    So your story is about decapitated heads. I can't say many people will jerk off to that.
     
  3. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    You would think so but have you ever been to pixiv?
     
  4. Pasin

    Pasin Really Experienced

    That some kinda fairy kingdom? I don't think such little people would ever satisfy me if you know what I mean.
     
  5. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    You know... I saw that one like multiple times on the front page and dismissed it cause it didn't sound interesting... I do not know how I never noticed it was one of yours.
     
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  6. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    XD, yeah I don't think I win any awards with that title.
     
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  7. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Well I mean it didn't sound interesting, because I don't find sissies hot.
     
  8. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    The issue I'm having is that it's supposed to appeal to both the femdom and maledom audience

    Which is just an atrocious way of going about it XD

    But yeah, there is maledom in it. First time I actually ever wrote maledom on this site.
     
  9. JohnTitor45

    JohnTitor45 Experienced

    I like it. It's straightforward and tells the reader exactly what the story's about. It's only a bad title if it turns out to be about dog girl maids and... something other than sissy slaves.
     
  10. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Oh well maybe I'll give it another look then...