Cavern of Lust

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by elmer7780, Mar 23, 2015.

  1. elmer7780

    elmer7780 Experienced CHYOA Backer

    Hi all,

    http://chyoa.com/story/cavern-of-lust/cover

    Just wanted to put up a thread for this interactive, especially with Necro5 being awesome in accepting new threads relatively fast. Currently, there are three notable threads in the story map: a Goblin path started by Necro5 and continued by Torg, a Minotaur by throbbin, a cavern path started by spentbob to which I've been focusing on lately.

    At the top of my head, there is currently these monsters: slime girls, goblins, ogres, minotaurs, metal door suckers (Don't know if there is a proper name for these), female slugs, and hopefully soon, succubi.

    So, please give your ideas, opinions, or what contributions you've made or want to see.
     
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  2. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    I will continue the Goblin thread for as long as it keeps feeding me. I'm really enjoying writing about the clash of cultures with the insatiable goblin-sluts.
     
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  3. spentbob

    spentbob Experienced

    This is a fun story with some interesting threads! I keep meaning to add more to it, but haven't been struck much by inspiration lately. And I have no idea what you'd call the cock-sucking-door-mounted-brass-head I added in one of my threads either. "Metal door sucker" is as good a name as any. :)

    Elmer, I've been enjoying your threads a lot - Blue is an awesome character, and I'm looking forward to seeing how she deals with the Succubus - but mind if I ask why you switched from present tense to past tense in them? Past-Tense-Second person always reads kind of strange to me. Asking what I am *going* to do feels natural, asking what I *did do* feel odd, for some reason.