Couple Goes Travelling

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by EmmaVerse, Jun 23, 2022.

  1. EmmaVerse

    EmmaVerse Virgin

    https://chyoa.com/story/Couple-Goes-Travelling.44559

    This is my first ever story (and really first time writing like this at all), some feedback would be appreciated. Also any idea's that anyone would like to add to the story at any point (though i have maybe 100 chapters of ideas left as it is) so i'm not struggling.

    The story is about an initially conservative couple who decide to go travelling and broaden their sexual horizons.
     
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