Cracking Anything goes really. Do you like it, do you hate it? Do you want to see something specific? Did you see something you wish you didn't? Let me know, even if you were to point out something simple like a spelling or grammatical error I would see it as a positive as it lets me improve the reader experience. Also a bit of a disclaimer or heads up, the story tends to be a bit hardcore and involves several weird aspects/fetishes so if that isn't your thing then, you know ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Really enjoying the premise and love the transformations of the characters. Really top notch writing, keep it up!
